Legend of the Arch Magus novel updates

Legend of the Arch Magus novel updates

Here is a problem, here is a solution, there is no struggle.

There is no luck or effort needed, the MC can just solve all problems away instantly.

There is also no agenda. The goal seems to be to develop the town. But why...? What's the point or aim? Was the initial interest in figuring out the world situation a fluke? 

But again, not like it matters, even if the world is a problem, MC will solve it instantly and then go for a cat nap. 

No, seriously. 

Things just fall into the MC's hands and he's the sole font of knowledge and ability in a town of over 500.

Starvation? Why are you starving silly humans, food is everywhere!

No funds? Hey, I found this super important mine on a 5 minute outing to the forest.

Harsh winter? Let me just create a better than modern heating system for the entire village that works ad perpetuity from some rocks and stuff. No details needed, it's magic!

At this point MC is not even a Gary Stu, he's no battle archmage. He's no researcher or clever schemer. He's a god given a mortal body with tiny limitations that don't matter at all. His magic can do absolutely everything after all and no problem will ever be big enough to last more than a paragraph.

This is only getting 2.5 stars because at least the writing is okay and the story coherent enough.

Disappointing.

Legend of the Arch Magus novel updates

I'm not sure why I can't get into this story. Plot and grammar are serviceable and I can always go for a good do-over story, but for some reason this story doesn't click.

sure some of the wording is a bit off for the setting, but that can be overlooked.

I think the problem is more with the characters. Two aspects specifically:

Nearly all  of the villagers and, most problematical the lifetime butler, don't see any issue with the MC's transformation. The lord has been a useless and aggressive asshole and suddenly is polite, helps the people and KNOWS MORE  ABOUT MAGIC THAN ANYONE ELSE IN THE KINGDOM. There is one villager who initially doesn't like him, but even he doesn't question the changes and just gets convinced to joking the oblivious herd.

Then there is the MC. He has absolutely no reason staying and improving the village. Why not try to ring a way to get home? If he doesn't want attention why throw around magic and make huge innovations like cement? If he wants to build a new life and become powerful again how come he hasn't even asked about the political situation, never mind interacting with fellow nobles? There is just no motivating factor that drives him.

Also he immediately has a fully detailed plan to modernize a run down village. That doesn't really fit with a background as an archmage.

Still, while I can't seem to enjoy the story I hope you can still manage.

Legend of the Arch Magus novel updates

Writing is not up to par - repeatedly use sentences such as "those guys" for soldiers or builders and "things"... it's like a poorly written light novel. The main character is OP; there is no character development of the secondary characters, much less the main character. This is definitely like a progression fic, but a very hastily written progression fiction missing a lot development.

Legend of the Arch Magus novel updates

I came into this with a lot of hope and was honestly left disappointed. No minor conflicts, let alone central ones, that quicken a reader's interest before the main character can solve it. Glaring unsure and/or lazy writing in multiple spots.

There's a story here. I don't see the author taking the time to find it at this late in the game, but it's there. 

Legend of the Arch Magus novel updates

I've enjoyed this novel, waited long enough for a few characters but realized the author kinda got attacked and he kinda didn't have the heart to continue posting it here. I don't give a lot of reviews and it's tedious but I just wondered why this got so many low reviews. This doesn't have glaring grammar problems and when I was reading it, I liked it. Sometimes looking for problems or logical points in the stories is not the best way to enjoy it. the low review ones are kinda the best magician with the best knowledge of course there would be problems with easy solutions for him (the mc) as the magic and education of the current world (the world he reincarnated to) is much lower and using his advantage get things done. 

Legend of the Arch Magus novel updates

This story for some reason is always recommended to me but I just can't get into it. 

I just find it boring, there is always an immediate solution for every issue that the MC comes across and it all just boils down to "I'm a super magic guy - My genius will see us through- believe in the young master, who two weeks ago was possibly a rapist" 

I didn't make it to tournament arc but I bet there is one.

Legend of the Arch Magus novel updates

Style and diction could use work, I know that's a hard thing to get right but when it does it lifts a story.

Story is good but some comments have made valid points about the village people being a so immediately accepting of the lord at the beginning of his change. At this point I couldn't say if it's better to rewrite those parts, rewrite the whole she-bang or leave it and continue. I've enjoyed what I read so far.

Grammar could also use work, it's hard to describe but when it feels like every character is talking properly and pronouncing everything correctly it occupies enough attention to scatter the building tension. Even I think this prolly doesn't make sense but that's how it feels.

Character could be more pronounced, I get that not every recurring character has to be unique but make them stand out from each other in more than their looks or roles.

If u can, strip away the rudeness or scathing in a bit of criticism and just take the useful bits.

Legend of the Arch Magus novel updates

Honestly exactly what is read in the review title?

The writer is making his character look like a genius by making everyone else look stupid, the idea the average person would forget that a plant that grows everywhere is edible after an apocalypse is dumb.

The idea people forgot/never discovered that poop is good fertiliser? Dumb!

Genuinly so much of this makes so little sense it's a joke. Clean up the plot make it more believable and then I may be able to suspend disbelief. But until then, you're better of reading chinese web novels.

Legend of the Arch Magus novel updates

A good read. The mc is OP but that is because he was a strongh Arch Magus before he died, but instead of going to the afterlife he was put into a body of a dukes second son. with a weaker body but still holding all his knowledge he has to try and rebuild his mana pool and also help the out of the way town he is the lord of. Helps the poor and builds up the town with his ideas and knowledge. Reads upto chapter 45.

Legend of the Arch Magus novel updates

I read this before...... was my first thought when I first started reading the story but decided to continue on because I didn't really get too far the first time and wanted to see if my opinion on it had changed, so the reason why I first stopped reading it was because the main character simply felt more like an idea of a good person and that was the problem an idea is an idea and not a person but this iteration feels more like he's a person that's kind but still had a personal agenda, though I still feel a bit iffy about everyone ignoring the extreme changes but to be frank I wouldn't be surprised if that type of thing happens in the real world (ignoring the inconsistencies part) after all why rock the boat when it's benefiting you or proving you right. I consider what I first read a rough draft and this being the pretty well made finished work.

What is the legend of the arch Magus about?

Description. An Arch Magus dies, only to find himself in the body of a young man in a medieval Kingdom. He finds out that he is the second son of a Duke, exiled to a desolated town by his own family.

Where can I read arch of Magus?

Read Legend Of The Arch Magus Book - Theifofbook - Webnovel.